Wednesday 29 March 2017

Improvements to script

Luna:
This is the story about how I lost my bestfriend... my co worker and almost ruined my career.
But lets start at the beginning.


Tessa:
(Curiously) "Are you going to the meeting for the BFI competition later?"

Tessa's friend Louise: 
(disgusted) "EUGH, Why would I go to that??"


Tessa:
(monotone) " Have you ever been so oblivious to some people who make you happy?"

Tessa:
(monotone) "And they disappoint you?"



Tessa:
(argumentatively/loud angry tone) "I thought you were becoming a better person!"

Luna:
(sassy tone) "Well at least my old friends don't try and change me like i'm incapable of being myself!"

Luna:

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