Media trailer first draft.

This is the first trailer draft that I have created. I can now look at the improvements I need to make as well as asking for audience feedback on my trailer to see what my target audience think of the product and if they have any ideas on what they would change, so that I can make these improvements.

My own ideas on improvements:

• Some of the scenes will need more variety of different shots
• could experiment with inter titles
• the inter title with 'Jamie' is too staged and not as natural. 
• The audio is not as suitable for the trailer as I would of liked. 

Here is the audience feedback I was given by 3 targeted audience members: